Hello friend! I will be doing this Critique for you, as requested.
First thing are the good things that I really like, and that you did well. Her eyes are wonderful, and their color goes well with the rest of her colors. The load of bread is adorable, don't think I've seen a cuter load of bread in all of my days.
The proportions are great for her arms and hands, which are also well-drawn. The background is expectedly cute, much like the rest of the picture. The effort you put into your drawings pays dividends, keep up the good work.
In conclusion, this is one of your best drawings yet, and I hope you use this as a sort of standard to how well you do future artwork.
First off, happy new year. As for Teto I like how you did the background. I don't know if its because its also red, but it really works great with the picture. Teto's fingers are excellent. Her nail polish isn't bigger than her fingers, and her fingers are pretty much all the same size. Her eyes are huge, but I think that is what you intended. Noneless, they are extremely well drawn, and look great. The shading and colors of her hair are flat out incredible. Her arms are not noodles which is good. Overall, I think you did an outstaning job on this. Great work overall.